My Own Version of We Can Last forever

[Jasonette]

This is a different version of the song "We Can Last Forever" that I originally wrote for a contest at another forum. I decided to give myself a chance to be creative with an alredy known song.and, I think...It was not so bad!!

Here it is:

Hello to all of you! I learned about the new Chicagofans contest, about writing our own lyrics to any Chicago song, or to my favorite Chicago song. I chose "We Can Last Forever".The song is about a man that makes his promise of eternal love to a sad girl that has suffered in the past because of a previous relationship.She's afraid of suffering again, and the Man tells, in his special words, to believe in his love.

"We Can Last Forever" Or "Love will be so tender"

VERSE 1:

Come here with me
I want you just to see what I can see
In you I believe

Don't be afraid
I'll never hurt your soul

Just look into my eyes
And you will find a pure love
One that never ever will grow old

CHORUS:

Darling, I just wanna be the light
That always will be shining at your sight
Love will be so tender

Kisses will make a sweet, loving rain
I promise you'll be far away from pain
Your sorrows will drain (or "Let me be your man")

SECOND VERSE:

Girl, stay with me
You always look so beautiful to me
So gorgeous to see (or "In me, please believe")

It's not a lie
I would never deceive (or "Let's sail away, in the magic pool of love")

Baby, forget that man
I'll always be by your side
'Cause my love for you will never die

SECOND CHORUS:

Sweetheart, I just wanna be the man
That every morning wants to make you smile
We can make it better

Rainbows will be born to stop the rain
I'll promise you'll be far away from pain
(Little guitar break) Forget yesterday

(Powerful guitar solo) LOVE WILL BE SO TENDEEEEEER!!!!
(trumpet solo)

FINAL CHORUS:

Darling I just wanna be the light
That always will be shining at your side
Love will be so tender

Kisses will make a warm, loving rain
I promise you'll be far away from pain

Lyrics by Jasonette

[YouComeToMySenses]

Very pretty, good job on writing Vero!!

[Jasonette]

Thanks very much, YCTMS!!!

So, did the song make sense to you??? Was it difficult to read??It seems it wasn't!!
I tried every moment for the verses to fit and correspond with each other of the original verses.

I wish Jason could read this, and know what he thinks!!

[FadeToBlack]

Wow Vero thanks for sharing with us your song. It's awesome!

[YouComeToMySenses]

admin said:

Thanks very much, YCTMS!!!

So, did the song make sense to you??? Was it difficult to read??It seems it wasn't!!
I tried every moment for the verses to fit and correspond with each other of the original verses.

I wish Jason could read this, and know what he thinks!!

Yes, I understood the meaning of your song just fine and the verses flowed well together